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©2006-2009 ~c-dog21
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um...added...odd foggy back round for no other reason than to appease myself...i suck...deal with it

max has been ninj'd its so awesome

edit: tell me if you like it more now!

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:icondarkhampster0:
OoooOoooOooooOoooohhh!! Fancy! The last two panels are fantastic, just death doing what he does completely emotionless. The fog is a nice tough.

Yay ninja'd

yay!

^_^

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Mm . . . I don't think Death should have those shiny eyes for two panels. Or at all, unless you *have* to have them. I think it'd set his personality better right off the bat if they were cloaked in shade on his face, like you see in some manga.

The chibi versions of Maxwell and Death in the last two panels are perfect. :P You have a very distinctive style of chibi. But it would be funnier if Max were just flailing his arms around like a madman in the last panel. >_> Also, the speed lines where Death turns his head there are kind of distracting.

For a page that's about half chibi and half normal style, it's very expressive. XD I like the "Wooooo".
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:D omg! Awesome! I love Death...he makes me giggle...And the fog looks totally awesome. Its like dark...BUT WITH FOG! Nice Job, C-Dizzle.

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"They're coming to take me away HaHa. They're coming to take me away HoHoHeeHeeHaHa! To the Funny Farm where life is beautiful all the time! And I'll be so happy to see those nice young men in their clean white coats. They're coming to take me away!"
:icondarkhampster0:
I do like it more now actually. Though admittably it's tough to compare as the original was removed, you did something with the fog and it looks cooler this way. Also, the lines on the face, much better than the stars. Awesome! :D

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PROJECT WAY OLD | MY GALLERY

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:iconjaver:
Yeah, that's exactly what I meant about the eye-shadowing thing. It looks much better now, indicates just how little he really cares. : ) I also like the additional shading on Maxwell's hair.

Let's see, something to criticize . . . Sound effects would be nice. Since this is a heavily chibi page, you can just do the minimum -- like a little "fwip" or something in the fourth panel. It's up to you, though.

The tone is hypnotic. @_@ It draws me innnnn . . .
:iconc-dog21:
thx's i redid the pages again but im tired of posting over and over...so no new for you...got the 3rd pg up though

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c-dizzle? i like it hey thanks...you should post more *demands posting* and you should cut back on the drugs but thats beside the point...thanks for the commplement

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if you are not nice and polite the giant maneating clam will eat you :evillaugh: hahaha
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Weeee! I'm finally here and viewing the awesome. I didn't see the original but this looks (*cough*) DAMN GOOD!!!!...yeah...that about covers it. I am you fan-girl.

10,000 needles!!!!

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your powers are useless...the clowns are on my side.

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